Jet omega is in love with Optimus prime. Even tho she is small and 13 years old too and can change into a mermaid autobot and also a fighter jet too.

Hey can My TFA oc jet omega be in your story too as the jet twins little sister please

Things you really need to work on is character development, plot, and writing.
The story plot could use a little work. Like having all the Autobots falling in love with madison and madison being a ' Ninja in training', would not sail well with others. People like a story that makes sense and has logic to it. Now I understand, this is Transformers, almost no logic, BUT you can at least make the human characters logical and not the center of attention.
The characters shouldn't be based off real life people and yourself, you should create your own characters. Take my comic for example. I do not know a october, jason or regan in reality. I just created them with the ideas I had for my story, nor are they the main characters. Just side characters. Another good example of character development is she has amazing characters. Now she DID base 1 character off herself, but notice how the character, Jenna, is not a main character, More of a side character. You must also think about canon characters ( like bumblebee ) in the fanfic. Ratchet ( since it was shown he HAD something with Arcee ) and Optimus are good examples. They most likely would NOT fall in love with Madison, since Ratchet and Arcee are mainly paired and was almost called canon in TFA. Now Bumblebee I could imagine, but it's not good for a OC to fall in love with a main character. If the OC were to love say... Ironhide. That would make sense. Also inter-species relationships aren't the best for Fanfics either. SarixBumblebee is somewhat acceptable, since there is a large fan base whom believes Sari would've had a full cybertronian mode in season 4, if it were made. Plus 'Love at first sight ' isn't good for a fan fic. You must make the characters know each other for awhile, before they get together. The autobots also would never come to a school, just for a rowdy classroom situation. That should be the school board's job.
You should also try writing the story yourself. Not basing it off a roleplay. Also writing a fanfic correctly, not with emotes such as or . Try using words and sentences. Try and keep things focused on the plot too. Like the thing with Madison and her little sister fighting about xbox. That part should be left out. Also where the girls are talking about Madison's new earrings and whatnot. WFC and aeropostale would most certainly not be put in a TFA fanfiction, for they never were IN TFA. WFC is a completely different universe and aeropostale is a name-brand store that actually exists.

I hope these helped. Good luck on the story!